АНГЛИЙСКИЙ ЯЗЫК! HELP! ENGLISH LANGUAGE!

I'M GIVING YOU 15 POINTS!

Task 2. Write about the most exciting experience of travelling that you had.
You should:
•use Present Perfect Simple to share your experience;
• link your ideas into paragraphs with three/four basic connectors;
•punctuate your work correctly.

The City of my Dream
Since young age, I have always wondered what the perfect place for living would be like. Now, I can say that I have a clear vision of the city of my dreams. First of all, it should be situated in a sunny part of our planet and have great weather conditions all year round. Secondly, there should be neither crime nor any violence there. Only good and kind people can reside in such city. Life can be much easier and nicer if everyone is loving and understanding. In the city of my dreams people will live in peace and quiet, without any worries and fears. This city will have excellent roads, cheap stores, many beautiful parks and playgrounds for kids, several entertainment centers and else. The population of the city will be neither too rich, nor poor. People will live equally well. Older people will be respected and taken care of. The streets will be clean and safe. There will be no homeless animals in the city of my dreams. Another important condition is to have a loyal government. People in the city of my dream will never be in a hurry and they will do only the jobs they like. However, I certainly understand that it’s just my dream, I really hope that at least some of the mentioned qualities will come true in the future.

Hi all, today I want to tell you about a great man who died too early, and it is about Kurt Donald Cobain. Kurt Cobain born on 20 February 1967 in the Grays Harbor hospital in Aberdeen, Washington. Kurt grew up in a musical family: his maternal uncle Chuck Fradenburg, performed by a group called The Beachcombers, aunt Mary Earl played guitar in various local bands, great-uncle Delbert had a career of tenor and even starred in the 1930 movie "King of jazz".Interest in music manifested itself quite early: according to his relatives, at the age of two years he gladly sang the songs of The Beatles. In four years he wrote his first song about a trip to the local Park. At the age of seven received a gift from my aunt a drum kit.In 1985 Kurt formed a band, called Fecal Matter, but soon the group changed its name to Nirvana.Kurt Cobain a great musician and performer, became famous for having played grunge and rock with his rock band.He died on 5 April 1994 because he was suicidal.