Correct the following academic letter of gratitude paying attention to both the structural organization and content of the letter. Ground your corrections. 2457, United Kingdom
23G4 Longvillage Street
A109 Wood Street
Fred Gregman
Subject: Thank you for the interview
Good afternoon, Professor Lengdon.
Thanks so much for your time and opportunity of having an interview with you yesterday, 14 Nov. The assistant engineer position you outlined sounds cool and great. I evaluate my professional skills very high and I’m sure that I would be a valuable addition to your trainee program. Thanks again and again for the chance you provide, hope I’ll get your decision concerning my candidacy as soon as possible. See you.
16, March, 2016
John Collins
Graduate student of Math Department,
University of Blimuth
We have not seen you. I have read your letter and want to write something about yourself.
I have two older sisters, one cousin, and another native. The native name is Julia, she has beautiful brown hair. My sister has a dog, Archie. Archie is a very good dog
Cousins name is Nastya. Nastia is also very beautiful long brown hair. Nastia also had a dog and the dog's name is Simon.
Julia had already graduated from high school, and my sister Nastya will finish just this year. Nastya studied for very well and often helped me with my English
She likes to watch TNT,Yu,STS, FRIDAY and other channels. Nastya also watching Katya ask for advice.
Julia looks the same channels, but most of the TV watching cartoons from DISNEY PIXSAR