Decide if the lines are correct (put a tick) or there is an extra word which you must cross out.
If you are worried about burglary, which in 1996
00 cost insurance companies the millions of pounds in
1 compensation, there is a good news for you.
2 A traditional security system, with specially built
3 security doors and detectors at each one door and
4 window, is very expensive to install. Technology
5 though, will soon make the 'intelligent home" as possible,
and the whole system it will be included in the price
7 of the house. New homes will have be built with a
8 special electronic system which will connect up
9 lights, heating, security and anything else the owner
10 chooses. This means lights can to be programmed
11 to turn on and off automatically at set times, making
12 it seem as if someone is at the home even when
13 everyone is out. Curtains can also be opened and
14 closed by the computer, and all of intruders can be
15 recorded by video camera, making it possible to
protect yourself and your belongings easily.
1. If you are worried about burglary, which in 1996 cost insurance companies the millions of pounds in compensation, there is a good news for you.
- Correct
2. A traditional security system, with specially built security doors and detectors at each one door and window, is very expensive to install.
- Cross out the word "one" because it is unnecessary. The correct version is: "A traditional security system, with specially built security doors and detectors at each door and window, is very expensive to install."
3. Technology though, will soon make the 'intelligent home" as possible, and the whole system it will be included in the price of the house.
- Cross out the word "it" because it is unnecessary. The correct version is: "Technology though, will soon make the 'intelligent home' possible, and the whole system will be included in the price of the house."
4. New homes will have be built with a special electronic system which will connect up lights, heating, security and anything else the owner chooses.
- Cross out the word "be" because it is unnecessary. The correct version is: "New homes will be built with a special electronic system which will connect up lights, heating, security and anything else the owner chooses."
5. This means lights can to be programmed to turn on and off automatically at set times, making it seem as if someone is at the home even when everyone is out.
- Cross out the word "to" before "be" because it is unnecessary. The correct version is: "This means lights can be programmed to turn on and off automatically at set times, making it seem as if someone is at home even when everyone is out."
6. Curtains can also be opened and closed by the computer, and all of intruders can be recorded by video camera, making it possible to protect yourself and your belongings easily.
- Cross out the word "of" before "intruders" because it is unnecessary. The correct version is: "Curtains can also be opened and closed by the computer, and all intruders can be recorded by video camera, making it possible to protect yourself and your belongings easily."
В итоге, корректные предложения: 1. If you are worried about burglary, which in 1996 cost insurance companies the millions of pounds in compensation, there is good news for you; 2. A traditional security system, with specially built security doors and detectors at each door and window, is very expensive to install; 3. Technology though, will soon make the 'intelligent home' possible, and the whole system will be included in the price of the house; 4. New homes will be built with a special electronic system which will connect up lights, heating, security and anything else the owner chooses; 5. This means lights can be programmed to turn on and off automatically at set times, making it seem as if someone is at home even when everyone is out; 6. Curtains can also be opened and closed by the computer, and all intruders can be recorded by video camera, making it possible to protect yourself and your belongings easily.