Изменить 6 слов на метафоры в данном тексте This is a good piece of writing that establishes an atmosphere of discomfort before shifting to one of anxiety and then panic. A range of sentence structures are used effectively to highlight different details. There is some good use of vocabulary, although word choices could be more original and sophisticated in places. There are some interesting similes and personification, but more variety could be achieved through metaphor. Opening and closing sentences are good at grabbing the reader's attention.

2)The weather in November is usually nastier (nasty) than in October. October doesn't have so many rainy days. 3)Mary's bedroom is the most comfortable (comfortable) room in the house. It is always clean and tidy too. 4) Peter thinks he is the strongest (strong) in his class. But I don't think so. Myfriend Henry is a lot stronger (strong) 5) Kate's English is better (good) than her French. She speaks English very well. 6) This little book is dearer (bear) to me than any book in the bookcase: it is my sister's present. 7) The film we watched yesterday is more interesting (interesting) than the film we are watching now. 8) Mary says she is the happiest (happy) wife and mother in the world. 9) Diana is the best (good) pupil in her class. And who is the worst (bad)? 10) We wanted to have all the tastiest (tasty) things for our holiday dinner.

Что  ж, попробую. (текст буду писать сразу в прошедшем времени!     1. армия  выиграла битву/ the russian army won the battle.  2. они продавали только газеты на улице/ they were selling newspapers on the street.  3. мальчик появился скоро/ the boy appeared very soon.  4. он всегда говорил правду/ he always spoke the truth.  5. солнце поднималось и всё становилось таким ярким/the sun was rising, and everything was so bright .  6. он вставал в пять и ловил автобус в 6: 30/he was up at five and catch the bus at 6: 30.  надеюсь, всё правильно.