More time with the above is true
hand, some peop
family
Conclude
• All in all, ...
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Writing
9 a) 10.5.1 10.5.5 Read the rubric and match the viewpoints
(1-5) to the examples/reasons/results (a-e) that support
them.
sum up
Express opinion
In my viewlopin
I feel/believe/thi
I'm concerned,
You've had a class discussion on the following statement: People
should live without money. Write an essay giving reasons to
support your opinion (120-180 words).
Plan
Introduction
(Para 1) state
Main Body
1
Viewpoints
Example/Reason & Result
You will be able to a There is no need to spend a certain
use and improve
number of hours at a job. You can do
your talents if you
your work at your own pace.
live without money. b You will only spend time with people
Living without
who live nearby. You may lose touch
money requires a lot
with some people.
c You will have to grow your own food.
This takes a lot of time and energy.
(Para 2) first v
rease
(Para 3) Secc
reas
(Para 4) opp
exal
2.
Conclusion
(Para 5) rese
3
of hard work
Living without
money is good for
relationships
Life is less rushed
d You will use your abilities to make
4
Cha
without money
5 Living without
money makes your
social circle smaller.
When you fin
things or offer services to trade for
the things you can't make or do. Your
skills will improve
e You have to work with others to get
what you need to survive. You will
have better communication skills
and friendships.
essay, check
number
inclusion
formal la
rrecto
school really plays an important role in our life. you may like it or you may not but we spend so much time at school that it becomes our second home. and no doubt this is true. what is the role of school in modern age? first of all it is making students literate. all students study for eleven years to get knowledge. and the most important role of school is giving knowledge. there are students who like studying because they are doing well in most subjects and they are going to continue their education after school, get higher education. but for those who are not successful in schooling and who are always pressed by their parents and teachers school becomes boring and not interesting.
the education given at our school is of a very high standard. i'm a good student actually and i don't have many problems with schooling. i generally get on quite well with the teachers. i am quite successful in class and i usually go to school with pleasure, because i like my school and my teachers.
i think school gives me not only knowledge. children are taught real life there. school helps us understand our life better. school is a place where we create and develop our relationships, are taught to be tolerant and respect one another. and school teaches us principles and how not to lose face in difficult situations.