Напишите с объяснением, почему именно такая форма, а не другая

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Today we went to a class in Nikolaev zoo. It was very interesting and fantastic! There we saw a striped zebra, brown bear and llama. They can be fed. We rolled the bear meat in a cage. Zebra thrown on the floor. A lame allowed to eat out of hand. After that we went to look at the lion-king of beasts! It was very interesting in this zoo. I'll remember for a long time ...
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Сегодня мы поехали с классом в Николаевский зоопарк. Было очень интересно и фантастично! Там мы видели полосатую зебру, бурого медведя и ламу. Их можно было кормить. Медведю мы кидали в клетку мясо. Зебре бросали на пол. А ламе давали покушать из рук. После этого мы пошли смотреть на льва-короля зверей! Очень было интересном в этом зоопарке. Я это запомню надолго...

I think our magazin definetly needs new features.

I take your point.What,do you think,I should include to make it better?

I think you should add more pictures.

That's awesome idea!And I think that we should also add some interesting facts,because many people ask to do so.

That's mammoth!Have you got any other bright ideas?

I am also thinking of adding crosswords.What do you think about it?

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That is another good idea,I support you.We may also add a section of comments.

No,we'd better add more pictures.

Personnaly I think that we'd better add a section of comments because many people aksed todo that.

May be so.I think it will be great.