Найти проблему/главную тему высказывания, прокомментировать путем написания эссе. 200-250 слов. 5. "Everyone sees life through their job. To the doctors, the world is a hospital. To track drivers, it's a road system"

In our times a lot of people wants to change their looks. it might be their clothes, face, body or hair. some people does all of this. a tv and a magazines learn people how to look perfect , but not everyone is able to follow that advices. some people risks and goes to the different neoplasties, but it is very bad for their health and very dangerous. some people thinks that they are too fat and stops eating. a diet is a good way to slim body if you will follow advices your own doctor, who knows all of your body and all of you life. some people thinks that they are perfect but some people are talked that they are too fat or ugly. this is the next rison why does the man or women wants to become attractive.

▪ I think there is much (чего?) in what Robert says. The music IS the beginning of all. I don’t like what Ben likes because I think that dance music and music with catchy tunes is boring. ▪I have always liked classical and rock music because it's emotional and relaxing (убираем повтор). Это предложение крайне корявое, по-моему, что хотим сказать? - What I most enjoy in this music is what this music inspires. и дальше тоже как-то совсем не очень, особенно последнее ((( So what I need in music is something emotional and breathtaking. To sum it up, this music is amazing and it enriches me.