The second part returned to their adulthood. It awoke and a series of child murders caused Mike, the town’s librarian, to call the group back together. They all agreed to return except for Stan who slited his wrists rather than return.
Mike reminded them of the story and they decided to kill it once and for all. It began to manipulate the minds of those around him and it kidnaped some of their significant others. It appeared to them as their original fears and they followed it to its lair. There it almost killed them but they performed the Ritual as in the first part.
They managed to injure it severely and they saved Bill from the Deadlights. They found that it had laid eggs, so they destroyed them and Bill crushed it’s heart between his hands finally killed it. A massive storm swept through Maine, collapsing Derry’s downtown and they concluded that it’s influence had finally broke.
As they went through the next months, their memories began to fade and they gradually forgot about it and each other. It and the town of Derry had finally died, ending the influence of the being once and for all.
Много запятых , они расставленны как в рускком языке
В английском языке с этим проще.
Вы сами писали текст? Очень странная компоновка предложений, а так ошибки исправленны)
I'm going to talk about my day when I go to school. I get up at seven AM. Then I go to the bathroom and brush my teeth, do a washing-up. Then I have my tasty breakfast. After that I put on my clothes, grab my rucksack and go to school. I always try to be at school on time. At ten AM I have my lunch at school and I have a dinner after lessons. Once I am done with my dinner, I leave school to home. At home I do some tasks I was given at school. Once I've completed that, I have a snack, I turn on TV and watch my favourite cartoon. Then I turn on my computer; I chat with my friend, play my computer games, read something interesting. At eight or nine PM I have a supper. At ten PM I brush my teeth, take a shower and at eleven PM I go to bed. Good night! Я собираюсь рассказать о своем дне, когда я хожу в школу.Я встаю в семь утра. Затем я иду в ванную и чищу зубы, моюсь. Тогда у меня есть мой вкусный завтрак. После этого я надел одежду, схватил рюкзак и пошел в школу. Я всегда стараюсь быть в школе вовремя. В десять утра у меня есть обед в школе, и я поужинаю после уроков. Как только я закончил с моим ужином, я ухожу из школы домой. Дома я выполняю некоторые задания, которые мне давали в школе. Как только я закончил это, я перекусил, включил телевизор и посмотрел мой любимый мультфильм. Затем я включаю компьютер; Я беседую с моим другом, играю в компьютерные игры, читаю что-то интересное. В восемь или девять вечера я ужинаю. В десять вечера я чищу зубы, принимаю душ и в одиннадцать вечера ложусь спать. Доброй ночи!
The second part returned to their adulthood. It awoke and a series of child murders caused Mike, the town’s librarian, to call the group back together. They all agreed to return except for Stan who slited his wrists rather than return.
Mike reminded them of the story and they decided to kill it once and for all. It began to manipulate the minds of those around him and it kidnaped some of their significant others. It appeared to them as their original fears and they followed it to its lair. There it almost killed them but they performed the Ritual as in the first part.
They managed to injure it severely and they saved Bill from the Deadlights. They found that it had laid eggs, so they destroyed them and Bill crushed it’s heart between his hands finally killed it. A massive storm swept through Maine, collapsing Derry’s downtown and they concluded that it’s influence had finally broke.
As they went through the next months, their memories began to fade and they gradually forgot about it and each other. It and the town of Derry had finally died, ending the influence of the being once and for all.
Много запятых , они расставленны как в рускком языке
В английском языке с этим проще.
Вы сами писали текст? Очень странная компоновка предложений, а так ошибки исправленны)
I get up at seven AM. Then I go to the bathroom and brush my teeth, do a washing-up. Then I have my tasty breakfast. After that I put on my clothes, grab my rucksack and go to school. I always try to be at school on time. At ten AM I have my lunch at school and I have a dinner after lessons. Once I am done with my dinner, I leave school to home. At home I do some tasks I was given at school. Once I've completed that, I have a snack, I turn on TV and watch my favourite cartoon. Then I turn on my computer; I chat with my friend, play my computer games, read something interesting. At eight or nine PM I have a supper. At ten PM I brush my teeth, take a shower and at eleven PM I go to bed. Good night!
Я собираюсь рассказать о своем дне, когда я хожу в школу.Я встаю в семь утра. Затем я иду в ванную и чищу зубы, моюсь. Тогда у меня есть мой вкусный завтрак. После этого я надел одежду, схватил рюкзак и пошел в школу. Я всегда стараюсь быть в школе вовремя. В десять утра у меня есть обед в школе, и я поужинаю после уроков. Как только я закончил с моим ужином, я ухожу из школы домой. Дома я выполняю некоторые задания, которые мне давали в школе. Как только я закончил это, я перекусил, включил телевизор и посмотрел мой любимый мультфильм. Затем я включаю компьютер; Я беседую с моим другом, играю в компьютерные игры, читаю что-то интересное. В восемь или девять вечера я ужинаю. В десять вечера я чищу зубы, принимаю душ и в одиннадцать вечера ложусь спать. Доброй ночи!