Practice with Style Recommendations 6-10
6. Avoid noun strings.
7. Avoid unclear pronoun reference.
8. Use parallel constructions.
9. Construct your paragraphs according to the basic principles of academic writing.
10. Use transition words and phrases appropriately.

How can these sentences be reduced or made clearer?
1. The human resource development project newspaper deadline is Friday at 4:00.
2. Because Senator Martin is less interested in the environment than in economic development, he sometimes neglects it.
3. The tribes emphasized survival, aid, and being responsible for one another.
1. Coach Thompson was a brilliant strategist, a caring mentor, and friend.
2. Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.
3. When Jim’s son was a year old, he decided to get married again.
4. John worked in a national forest last summer, which may be his career choice.
5. The soldiers burned a refugee camp as a result of the earlier attack. This was the cause of the war.
6. It was raining hard; on the other hand, I went outside for a long walk because I needed the exercise.
7. American women have been dyeing their hair for years. American men, nevertheless, only recently started coloring theirs.

1. He may use the diagrams for his report.

2. Every motion must be considered as a relative motion.

3. Fractions can be added if they have common denominator.

4. Most persons can hear sounds between 20 and 20,000 vibration per second.

5. The generator must be repaired as soon as possible

Трансформируйте предложения в

1. He might use the diagrams for his report.

2. Every motion had to be considered as a relative motion.

3. Fractions could be added if they have common denominator.

4. Most persons were able to hear sounds between 20 and 20,000 vibration per second.

5. The generator had to be be repaired as soon as possible

и будущее время

1. He will be allowed to use the diagrams for his report.

2. Every motion will have to be considered as a relative motion.

3. Fractions will be allowed to be added if they have common denominator.

4. Most persons will be able to hear sounds between 20 and 20,000 vibration per second.

5. The generator will have to be repaired as soon as possible

ответ: 1. Не goes to school every day. Не doesn`t go to school every day. Does he go to school every day? 2. We go to the cinema on Saturdays. We don`t go to the cinema on Saturdays. Do we go to the cinema on Saturdays? 3. They eat a lot. They don`t eat a lot. Do they eat a lot? 4. We work every day. We don`t work every day. Do we work every day?5. I come from Ukraine. I don`t come from Ukraine. Do you come from Ukraine? 6. He comes from Germany. He doesn`t come from Germany. Does he come from Germany? 7. They live in the USA. They don`t live in the USA. Do they live in the USA? 8. He plays football every day. He doesn`t play football every day. Does he play football every day? .9. I visit my parents very often. I don`t visit my parents very often. Do you visit your parents very often? 10. His father works at an office. His father doesn`t work at an office. Does his father works at an office? 11. She gets up at seven o'clock. She doesn`t get up at seven o'clock.  Does she get up at seven o'clock? 12. They play tennis very often. They don`t play tennis very often. Do they play tennis very often? 13. My sister works here. My sister doesn`t work here. Does my sister work here? 14. He wants to become a pilot. He doesn`t want to become a pilot. Does he want to become a pilot? 15. My brother watches television every night. My brother doesn`t  watch television every night. Does my brother watch television every night? 16. I read newspaper every day. I don`t read newspaper every day. Do I read newspaper every day?  17. Her father finishes his work at six o'clock. Her father doesn`t finish his work at six o'clock. Does her father finish his work at six o'clock? 18. Nick goes to bed at nine. Nick doesn`t go to bed at nine. Does Nick go to bed at nine? 19. He goes to school by bus. He doesn`t go to school by bus. Does he go to school by bus? 20. We skate once a week in winter. We don`t  skate once a week in winter. Do we skate once a week in winter?

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