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Some people say that online education will replace teachers in the nearest future.
Nowadays we have the Internet and many modern technologies and every person have them. Obviously many people think that online education is better than the one we use to use. Others disagree.
In my opinion, online education can replace teachers in the nearest future. Firstly, in the Internet we can find the information that your teacher may not know. Online we can find a huge variety of video lessons. Moreover, it’s completely free. Secondly, online education is faster. Pupils can ask any question at any time they want. Also, they don’t have to spend money and time to go to school.
However, there is another opinion. Some people believe that learning at home can cause changes in your general life. You wake up later and go to sleep at late night.
I do not share the opposing idea. I think people should keep track of time. They can make their own schedule and they will have time for a hobby.
In conclusion, there are different views on this issue but I think that any way of education is useful but people them self’s decide what to choose.
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