Проверьте, , эссе по . желательно с указанием на ошибки и примерной оценкой. заранее ! тема: some people believe that animals without owners should have the right to live on the streets in cities. others say that they could be dangerous and should be collected and found new homes, or even put down. let us speculate who is right: defendants who claim that homeless animals need to place in the shelter or in people' houses or the opponents who believe that animals must live on the streets and nothing need to change. personally,i think that waif animals better keep in the shelters.first of all,in the shelter animal will be provided of medical care,fed and received attention and solicitude.doubtless,many dogs have rabies or contagious diseases,consequently,they are very dangerous for people .besides,even if they do not have rabies,they are can be aggressive and hazardous.moreover,quite a bit of dogs gather in flock from three to seven or eight individuals. finally,there are people, who beat up innocent animals .they throw stones,bottles or even cans to them,pull their tails,beat them with sticks.animals suffer from human cruelty. on the other hand, we can observe that some people have another point of view.one cannot deny that homeless animals have many more chances to be noticed by people and taken by them to their house.others say that it is wrong to keep animals locked up.i consider that though animals can be detected by people,unlikely that somebody of them pick cat or dog up and that is better to animals be in closed setting,but in safety,than on freedom,causing danger themselves and people around. to draw the conclusion, one can say that men must make sure that they can provide a pet everything that it need before buy it.
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