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Hi Sasha(или другое имя)!
How are your? I have just come from the USA. It was wonderfull and I want to come back there...
I want to tell you about my trips to the Grand Canyon and the Mississippi River.It was amazing! I like it very much! 
The Grand Canyon is really beautiful place.  It is one of the most wonderfull places in the world! It looks like split mountains. This place is located very high and sometimes it was dreadfully.
The Mississippi River is located in the USA too! It is very long and beautiful river. I had a water trip on this river and I made some photoes for you. I put them in my letter and you will see it. 
I miss you very much! 
See you soon ,
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It  was  July  16,  2008  and  I  was  at  City  Hall  to  do  something  thatwould change my life forever. I went to Room 302 and got my workingcard.  I  thought  I  was  independent  and  ready  to  get  a  job.First I filled in applications. I put in over 100 applications at restau-rants, clothing stores, and hotels. I kept looking for a job, and I decidedto  go  to  the  mall.  I  was  interested  in  getting  a  place  in  one  restaurantbecause my good school friend worked there, and he told me they neededpeople.  I  thought  it  might  turn  out  to  be  successful.One  day,  when  I  came  home  and  turned  on  the  answering  machine,there was a message on it. It was a job! A lady from a supermarket calledme  for  an  interview  on  Tuesday.  I  was  very  excited.  This  was  my  first interview.  On  Sunday  I  got  up  early,  my  mom  and  I  went  shopping  fora dress. I put on this dress on Tuesday. The lady asked me a lot of questi-ons,  but  I  thought  over  the  answers  the  day  before.I  didn’t  get  the  job,  but  I  found  out  that  you  can’t  get  a  job  easily.It’s  very  hard  work.

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