Проверьте сочинение technologies in my life. it's 21st century now and this is a century of high technologies. there're tons of smartphones, notebooks, tablets etc. which help me to communicate with people. i can get instant access to anything i want due to the internet and that's really simplify my life. i spend my free time using my computer it's kind of for fun. because of the technologies particularly internet i can easily get skills that are necessary in the information age. it's just so easy all you have to do is just to push buttons to get whatever you want. i rely on technologies too much i trust them. i cannot imagine my life without all that stuff. but sometimes if we use all those gadgets too much we can get in deep troubles, unfortunately.
Technologies in my life.
It's the 21st century now and this is a century of high technologies. There're tons of smartphones, notebooks, tablets etc. which help me to communicate with people. I can get instant access to everything I want due to the internet and that really simplifies my life. I spend my free time using my computer. It's kind of fun. Because of the technologies especially internet I can easily get skills that are necessary in the information age. The only thing you need is to push buttons to get whatever you want. I rely on technologies too much. I trust them. I cannot imagine my life without all these things. But sometimes if we use all those gadgets too much we can get in deep troubles, unfortunately.
Technologies in my life.
It's 21st century now and this is THE PERIOD of high technologies. (нужен опр предлог, а слово заменено, чтобы избежать повтора) LOTS OF GADGETS (smartphones, notebooks, tablets) APPEARED which help PEOPLE to communicate with EACH OTHER. I can get AN instant access to anything I want WITH THE DEVELOPMENT OF the Internet. THIS MAKES MY LIFE SIMPLER. I spend my free time using computer AND FOR ME IT IS A kind of fun. .