Проверте текст на наличие ошибок, может быть слова не так записаны, а может вообще заменить нужно. i would like to say a few words about my great-grandmother . her name nadeeva fedosya egorovna . she was born may 29, 1915 in mordovia. she worked as an elementary school teacher . her family had 6 brothers and 2 sisters , 5 brothers and elder nephew died in the great patriotic war. these events affected the history of her family and our too. and i know that it is not moved from place to place . she moved to omsk in 1938, because in mordovia was a great drought , 5 years nothing would grow . it was the first and last crossing . unfortunately we have no family legends , but i'm happy that i could share with you at least something .
2) These events affected the history of her family and ours too.
3) It (потому что семья не she) moved to Omsk in 1938
4) because there was a great drought in Mordovia
5) for 5 years nothing had been grown
6) It was the first and last their resettlement (может быть, moving, но не crossing - это ближе к перекрестку или пересечению (дороги)