Проверьте на грамматику,! i have spent my new year's vacation in moscow.it was the cheerful and memorable time.in moscow there are many sights and we tried to visit everything.the best day was when we have gone to moscow city. i wanted to get there very much.it was my main goal of a trip.i have gone with the sister and her friends there. for a start we have taken a walk in huge shopping center (afimol-city) which is there.then we have decided to rise by one of towers to go to cafe.we have called the administrator which has gone down for us.in moscow city everything strictly we couldn't pass without attendant.we have begun registration and have given passports.the administrator has asked "who there is a miloserdova? you aren't 18 years old".we couldn't get to a tower the "empire" because of have been upset very strongly..but we have found a way out and have decided to go to other cafe in a tower "federation".it was on the 54th floor.i was on the palm! i have made many photo, and then sat and enjoyed night moscow.windows were instead of walls and to me it was terrible because i am afraid of height.but i could overcome fear because wanted to make a beautiful photo. i didn't want to leave this place very much! when we were have gone down and were among towers, i felt as if was in new york! i remember this day still.i dream to get to moscow city once again. my sister has told "we still will return here".
I wanted to get there very much.It was my main goal of the trip.I went with the sister and her friends there. For a start, we walked in a huge shopping center (which is called Afimol-city).then we decided to rise by one of towers to go to the cafe.We called the administrator which went down for us.In Moscow city everything is strict and we couldn't pass without an attendant.we began registration and gave passports.the administrator asked "Who is Miloserdova? You aren't 18 years old".We couldn't get to the tower "Empire" because of me...I was really upset. But we found a way out and decided to go to another cafe in the tower "federation".it was on the 54th floor.I was delighted!!Moscow is on the palm!I took lots of photos, and then we were sitting and enjoying the night Moscow.windows were instead of walls and the sight was terrible for me because I am afraid of height.but I could overcome fear because I wanted to make a beautiful photo.
I really didn't want to leave this place!when were among towers, I felt as I was in New York!I still remember this day. I'm dreaming to get to Moscow city once again. my sister told "We will return here". I hope!